Writing tools

The Door

Detail Of Old Door. RHS Wisley Surrey UK

In my never-ending quest to reduce my writing process to a series of extended metaphors, I’ve begun to describe the blank page as a door, a door through which the story can be found. A big, fat door, locked up tight with a keyhole you can stare through, but you’ll only ever see glimpses of the world beyond.

As a writer, it’s your job to get through that door. All that stuff you see in your head only gains life when you get it down on the page. Until you fill that blank page, you’re not a writer but a dreamer, which is an admirable thing in itself but a completely different thing.

There are a number of ways you can through a locked door, the most simple of which is with a key.

Royal key

The key, for me, is the perfect first line. That juicy line filled with voice and atmosphere that instantly transports you into a scene. You slip it in the keyhole and the door springs open, like it was just waiting for your touch. Much of the time, though, I have a whole keychain full of different keys, and I’ll try half a dozen out before I find the right one. This takes time. I can spend days musing on the perfect first line, days when I could be writing. It’s not always the perfect strategy, especially when you’re time-poor. In that case, you need something faster. You need to kick that baby down!

Kick
This is what some people call the Sh*tty First Draft method of writing. It works for a lot of people. It’s about just muscling in and getting down whatever comes into your head — all stuff you will need to fix later. It’s not pretty, but it works. It’s how I wrote my first book, but the longer I go on the less satisfying I find this method. I need something that doesn’t take days to get just a few words on the page, yet doesn’t leave a huge mess after I break down the door. One method I’ve found I like to call picking the lock.

Lockpicking Tools
Also known as freewriting. Awhile ago I was introduced to the concept of a working document. It’s a separate document in which you write about the story instead of just going ahead and muscling your way in, or sitting there daydreaming for hours. You write about what you’re trying to achieve in the scene, why you’re struggling with it, what you want the reader to know or not know. You write snippets of dialogue or description, character sketches and plot summaries. Whatever you want, as long as it is about your story and you are getting things down. It’s a way to sift through the stuff in your head, to slowly twist that lock until you find a way through. It’s slower than breaking down the door, but it’s quicker than sifting through a hundred keys.

Because, in the end, the blank page isn’t actually locked. It’s your brain that’s locked. It’s your own fear, your own internal editor, that is holding you back.

None of these methods are better or worse than the others, and there are other methods out there as well. It’s all about getting through the door to the story on the other side. It’s all about getting words on the page, fast and messy or slow and careful. It’s about tricking your brain, becoming a writer and not just a dreamer. It’s about finding what is right for you.

So, writer friends, I’m curious: How do you get through the door?

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Everybody Hurts

My sweet puppy Mika turned one this month. She’s getting to be quite a big dog, but she still has the brain of a puppy, leaping headlong into every situation without thought. Unfortunately, this joyful and innocent approach to life had some negative consequences earlier this week when she came across a German Shepherd on a walk. Mika did what she always does, bounding up to meet the other dog (and dragging me along behind her), but the German Shepherd didn’t return her affection when she tried to lick him on the face.

My girl

My girl

The consequence? Our beautiful puppy now has a nasty bite on her muzzle. A quick trip to the vets and a round of antibiotics and she’s okay, thank goodness, but it was a bit of a scare.

Mika has a boo boo

Mika has a boo boo

It’s never easy to see the people you love get hurt, especially when you are in a position of authority. All night I thought of what I could have done differently, how I could have kept her safe. I shouldn’t have left the harness behind. I should have crossed the road instead of walking by the dog. But the thing is, the only way to keep people — or puppies — totally safe, is to wrap them in cotton wool and keep them locked up inside all day, and that’s no way to live.

It wasn’t nice for Mika to get hurt like that, but she’s certainly learned from it. She’s learning manners, the correct way to approach other dogs, and that not all dogs are as nice as she is. These are skills she needs if she’s going to do all the things doggies like to do, such as go to the dog beach and meet other puppies. In the long run, Mika will be a happier puppy having learned this lesson.

The incident made me think of a lesson I learned recently about crafting memorable characters. Through many, many drafts, I discovered the only way to create meaningful change and growth in my characters was to give them challenges that reflected their deepest fears, brought out their worst traits, and forced them to be vulnerable.

As writers it’s certainly tempting to keep our characters safe, to wrap them in cotton wool and put only small hurdles in their paths. But stories are about growth and change, and these things do not occur in a vacuum. People only change when they are forced to do so. The strongest tissue only grows in response to a deep wound.

When creating characters that have real power to affect the reader, we should strive for nothing less than complete emotional honesty. Probe your characters for their deepest injuries, their most potent fears, and then exploit them mercilessly. Only when you let our characters get hurt in a meaningful way will believable change and growth occur.

P. S. I think this is especially important when you’re writing YA fiction. Teenagers live with their deepest selves so close to the surface, so raw and vulnerable, at the same time as they are being exposed for the first time to all the pain that exists in the world. It’s an emotionally tumultuous time and you’re doing your readers a disservice if you only skim the surface of what it’s like to be a teenager.

P.P.S. This past week Nova Ren Suma has been hosting a bunch of authors on her blog responding to the question: “What haunted you at 17?”. Go check it out if you’re interested in an excellent example of emotional honesty in writing.

P.P.P.S. Check out this awesome essay by Carrie Ryan on connecting internal and external conflict to create really memorable stories.

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Of First Dates and Manuscripts

A first date

A first date

I’m dating a new manuscript.

It’s exciting. It’s scary. I’m trying to take it slow.

Starting a new story is a lot like starting a relationship. You don’t just jump straight to marriage. You have to get to know each other first. You have to make those first moments special. The hard stuff comes later.

The first date is about chemistry. Some stories are shy. They have to be coaxed out of their shell. Others are loud and they’ll talk your ear off if you aren’t careful. Over time you start to get an idea of what kind of story can go the long haul. Not all of them will. It’s just a fact. Some stories look good, they talk pretty, but when it comes down to it, they’re just not the story for you.

Sometimes that chemistry isn’t apparent right away. Sometimes it’s love at first sight. Sometimes you fall hard and fast, sometimes slow and beautiful.

My manuscript and me, we had our first date yesterday, over coffee and biscotti. We’re not rushing into anything, but guys? I think it’s love.

First date notebooks. A fairly good representation of the new novel.

First date notebooks. A fairly good representation of the new novel.

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Arguments With Imaginary People

I’m a pretty stubborn person, and when I start an argument you’d better believe I won’t stop talking until I’ve either won or worn my opponent down. But if there’s one person I can’t win an argument against, it’s myself.

Lately I’ve been having arguments with people inside my head. This is problematic. What’s more problematic? My opponents are always right, and oh, how I hate to be wrong.

The arguments are about my crit notes and the imaginary people are my beta readers. Oh, they exist in real life, but I’m not crazy enough to fight their excellent reasoning to their faces. It just takes me time to bite back my pride and recognize the brilliance of their critiques. Because, something you will find when you’ve been doing this awhile? When you find the right critique partners they are pretty much always right.

So, here’s my advice:

1. Find yourself some brilliantly incisive critique partners. This is a process of trial and error, and sometimes you will find that just because someone is a great writer/critter/friend, doesn’t mean they are the right beta reader right for you. It’s a personality thing, as much as anything.

2. Polish, polish, polish your work until it’s as shiny as you can possibly make it on your own. Then admit it can still be better. That’s what your critters are for. It’s always handy to find some humility before you press send.

3. Send it out and watch your beautiful work of staggering genius be picked apart like a package of chips in the presence of seagulls. Mostly, they will be nice about it. They like chips, after all. But it can still be a horrifying thing to watch.

4. Take a break. Let your critters know you received their thoughts and thank them profusely. DO NOT start arguing or defending yourself. Not yet. Not ever.

5. Begin having arguments with imaginary people. Sort through the critiques in your head. Stand in the shower for hours at a time, lie on the couch or in the middle of the rug, clean your house and drive your kiddos to soccer practice, all the time watching your ego fight it out with your critique partners. Ask yourself why your reader felt a certain way. The problem they point out might be indicative of a bigger, underlying problem. Or maybe something else needs to change to make that one pointy part of your MS make sense.

6. Suck it up. (a.k.a find your courage)

7. Start revising.

8. Thank your critters again for being such marvelous, smart, generous people who have helped make your manuscript just that much shinier. Ask for clarification if you need it, but never, ever fight about it. At least not to their faces.

P.S Trust your critters. Know that they only want what’s best for you and your book. But if you find someone is being meaner than they need to, or if the critique seems more personal than impartial, or even if you just have different visions for the work, feel free to set the critique aside. But first examine yourself. Don’t take offense, and don’t react out of ego. It’s not about you. Seriously, it isn’t. It’s about your book, and making it the best possible book it can be.

P.P.S. I want to thank Shari, Kip, JRo and Raynbow for being the best critters and writer buddies a girl could ask for.

Love!

Love!

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Musings on Resolution

I’m never sure how much to share about my writing/querying journey on here. I don’t want to appear unprofessional, but at the same time one of my favorite things to do is read through the archives of author blogs from before they were published, to read about the struggles and the journey, the doubts and the eventual success.

Very briefly, I started querying Restless last year and very quickly stopped after receiving some professional feedback that made me rethink the entire novel. I just finished a HUGE rewrite. It took me six months. Among the many things changed, the climax and resolution are quite different than they were before. I won’t tell you exactly what changed, but one particular thread did not end as happily as it did in the first draft, and it started me thinking about resolution.

As well as that, I played a game a few weekends back called Heavy Rain. It’s a fairly unique game in that there are numerous possible endings. You play as four different characters as they attempt to save a young boy from a serial killer, and according to your split-second decisions made at high-pressure moments, not all of them may last to the end. In fact, in some endings, the killer is not found and the boy is not saved.

In the ending I got, the boy was saved, the killer died, but the protagonist also died just before the end of the game. It all hinged on one of those split-second decisions that I didn’t realize was so important at the time. I didn’t get the perfect ending, and I was surprised by how much that devastated me. I don’t get that sort of reaction on reading a novel that ends on a bittersweet note. I think it’s about responsibility — in real life, and in this game, you’re always thinking about what could have been. What could I have done differently? Is it my fault? Why didn’t I…?

Interestingly, the next weekend I went back and replayed that pivotal moment. I got the perfect ending, the protagonist lived and it felt… hollow. It didn’t feel right. On reflection, that first ending really was the perfect ending. There were consequences to my/the character’s choices. The ending was tragic, but it was also hopeful. It was bittersweet, not sickly sweet.

I  think as readers and as consumers of entertainment, we want to see our lives reflected. Even when we’re reading a book about supernatural creatures, we still want it to ring true in an emotional sense. I may have felt differently ten years ago, but I don’t want the characters to get everything they want. I want them to lose sometimes, and I want them to learn from their loss and grow.

I’ve made a very particular choice with the ending of my novel that not all readers are going to like. It might take some tinkering to make it work, but I’m pretty convinced it’s the right choice, for my book and for my characters. A few years ago I would have written it differently, but these days what I’m seeking is the emotional truth. I’m looking for hard decisions and endings that aren’t perfect, but feel real.

Maybe that will work against me, but I’m hoping my readers (even if those readers are just friends and family) will come to the same realization I did while playing Heavy Rain. Sometimes the most satisfying ending isn’t the one where everything ends up happily. Sometimes the most satisfying ending is about losing, and growing, and learning to move on.

I love this photo of a storm rolling into Death Valley. Oh, wasn't that an exciting drive.

I love this photo of a storm rolling into Death Valley. Oh, wasn’t that an exciting drive.

 

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When all You can Manage is a Word

One of my adventures.

One of my adventures.

This will be a short post, for reasons to be made clear.

I want to talk about goals (because it’s a day ending in ‘y’) and I want to talk about being busy (because I have been).

Sometimes life is tough. Sometimes life is overwhelming. Sometimes you feel like you are being tugged in a dozen different directions all at once and Christmas is coming and the puppy needs flea treatment and work’s driving you crazy and there’s a hole in the roof and oh my goodness it’s almost time to make New Years resolutions.

Sometimes goal-setting seems like a luxury the non-busy people have. But it’s not. Goal setting is how you break through all the busyness to focus on what’s really important in life. It’s how you prioritize all those things tugging at you. It’s how you stay sane.

I’ve been busy lately. But I have big dreams and I’m not going to let busyness get in the way of them. So, recently I’ve narrowed my list of goals down to something I could manage. Something contained in just a couple of words: Writer Adventurer.

Those two words encompass everything about what I want to be and what I want to do. So in the midst of moving house and everything else that’s going on in my life, I cling to those two words and I let them guide my choices in how I spend my time and energy.

Today, being a Writer Adventurer means walking the dog and plotting the second half of my revision. That’s all I can handle, apart from everything else going on in my life. But if I do those two things I will feel like I’ve achieved something. I will stay sane.

So, in the midst of hard and busy times, don’t try to stick to your massive goal list, don’t sign up for NaNo, don’t drive yourself crazy with word count goals and detailed exercise plans. Just pick a word or two that encapsulates those goals — maybe healthy, or writer, or mother — and each day find a way to work towards those words.

So. With that said, I’m going off to be a Writer Adventurer.

 

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How Baby Writers Become Big Writers

I’m a firm believer that the best way to grow as a writer, other than writing itself, is by living life. For one thing, how can we hope to adequately write about love and loss if we haven’t experienced it ourselves? But also, the world is full of stories. Every person is a storyteller. To learn to tell a good story, you need to immerse yourself in stories of all kinds. This is one of the reasons I don’t understand writers who say they don’t watch television or movies. My medium is always the written word, but I appreciate stories in all forms. I think watching good television can do just as much for your storytelling skills as reading a book.

There have been three things in recent years that have fundamentally changed who I am as a writer. I mean, there have been many more than three, but there are three I want to talk about.

The first is travel.

My first research trip

A few years ago, 2010 I think, I decided I was enough of a ‘real’ writer to go on a research trip. I wanted to write something creepy, so I picked the creepiest place I could think of to visit, my grandparent’s old place in Wiseman’s Ferry. I gathered my husband and a couple of friends and looked at a map. The Sydney Blue Mountains were kind of (not really) on the way and I’d never been so we decided to head there first.

The Blue Mountains took my breath away. The natural beauty is astounding, and the history, combined with the fog that blankets the place every night, gave the area a tremendous amount of atmosphere and mystery.

The next day we drove on to Wiseman’s Ferry, but it was Katoomba and the Blue Mountains that really stole my heart.

It was this trip that helped me understand one of my biggest drives as a writer and a reader. I’m not satisfied with a story unless it has a firm sense of place. Atmosphere and setting are often the first thing I know about my stories, and until I have that element, I can’t start. To me, setting is so much apart of the tone of the novel. I mean, think of Stephen King’s stories. The forests and towns and people of Maine are fundamental to all his novels. All my favorite stories have a tremendous sense of place.

Until I traveled to the Blue Mountains I really didn’t understand how much setting could affect my stories. Every trip I’ve taken since then has been about gathering ideas, getting a feel for places, understanding what makes places stand out. And now when I start a story I don’t have to waste time wondering why it just doesn’t feel right. I know it all comes down to setting.

The second thing that changed me as a writer is all because of my lovely husband, who introduced me to the world of video games.

My favorite game

The way I feel about video games is pretty similar to how I feel about TV. A story is a story and it’s all helpful to your development as a storyteller. But video games are different in that you are just that much more immersed in the world of the story. Watching TV is a passive activity, and yes, so is reading, but I think as writers we should strive for that video game-like immersion for the reader.

Laini Taylor referred to it as the fictional dream in reference to Stephanie Perkin’s Anna and the French Kiss (which I just read and HOLY MOLY).

I know I haven’t mastered it yet, but video games have helped me understand that feeling a little more. And the more I play games, watch TV and read books, the more I see what works and doesn’t work for me as a consumer of stories.

Lastly, I’ve spoken of my love of Veronica Mars. A lot. Well, that show taught me something that has fundamentally affected my writing.

Girl detective!

There’s this oft-told tale about the first season of Veronica Mars. All the way along, the writers were setting the scene for Veronica and her ex-boyfriend Duncan to get back together. But then Logan Echolls came along. Logan is not a nice guy. He has serious problems and he’s incredibly unlikeable. Veronica and Logan had serious chemistry.

What’s a writer to do? Follow the chemistry, of course.

When you’ve written something big it can be really hard to see past the words on the page. Even when you know something isn’t working, it’s so darn hard to press delete. But you need to follow the chemistry. Take an honest look at what you’ve written, get rid of what isn’t working and figure out how to make what DOES work just that much more awesome.

With this novel in particular, I’ve had to make some hard decisions. I’ve gotten rid of characters I loved because they didn’t work in the story (this would be an example of killing your darlings). I’m currently changing from dual perspective to single. In fact, the main character and concept I originally devised on that first trip to the Blue Mountains are completely different now.

Interestingly enough, the two things that have stayed the same are the setting and tone.

Veronica Mars taught me to follow the chemistry.

So, I’d love to know, what has televisions, games, books or living taught you about your writing?

 

 

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Bulldozer Revisions and Creative Courage

Sorry I haven’t been around much, folks. Life has been really busy, which gives me plenty to write about but not much time to actually sit down and write. Then there’s the fact that I’m going through the querying process, and while plenty is happening, I don’t think it’s wise to share it all in such a public forum. One day I will tell you all about it. Promise.

One bit of news I can tell you: We bought a house! We’ve been looking forever, and getting a bit sick of it all, to be honest. The other weekend we all shook hands and vowed that if we hadn’t found a house by next September we would all move to Canada. We found our house that same day.

So, what with making offers, organizing finance, inspections and now figuring out renovations and moving dates, things have been hectic. But that doesn’t mean I haven’t found time to write. I’m almost finished the first draft of the Just For Fun novel, but I’m taking a break to head into revisions with another.

These aren’t like any other revisions I’ve ever done. Awhile back I wrote a post on revision tools. I made three categories: Jackhammer, Scalpel and Feather-duster. I didn’t know it then but I missed a category and I want to talk about it now: Bulldozer Revisions.

Bulldozer revisions mean leveling your draft down to its very foundation and building back up from there. It means starting over. From scratch.

The reason I missed talking about Bulldozer revisions in my last post is because I’ve never really done them. Because to operate a Bulldozer you need two things: A helmet and a key. I’m starting to think this metaphor is getting out of hand, but let me break it down for you.

The Helmet

In order to level your manuscript and start over, you need protection. You need to know if things go awry, you won’t be broken. You won’t be lost. Your helmet is your confidence in your own abilities and in the story you are trying to tell. Before you head into a revision of this scale, you need to have a really strong sense of what you’re trying to achieve with the story. It can be discouraging to write a kazillion drafts and then realize you have to Bulldoze it all, but for me, those kazillion drafts, the kazillion wrong turns, are the only way I can get to the RIGHT path. Your helmet means knowing your story and characters really well. Sure, you can operate a bulldozer without a helmet, but it’s not recommended.

The Key

When I was querying my first novel there was one agent who was really interested, but she pointed out one aspect of my novel that made it hard to place in the market. I had an opportunity to revise my manuscript to make it a better fit, but I was scared. I’d spent a year and a half on this story and the idea of starting over made me want to puke. I revised, but I picked the wrong tool. I tried to scalpel my way to a stronger novel, when really it needed a bulldozer. Needless to say, I never sold that first novel.

Have you guessed what the Key is yet?

In order to perform a Bulldozer revision, above all you need courage.

I didn’t have that back then, but I do now.

 

Here’s the thing: Your key and your helmet go hand in hand. I didn’t have the courage to bulldoze that first novel because I didn’t have confidence in myself or my story. And in order to build that confidence you need to have enough courage to take chances.

One caveat: Bulldozing your novel isn’t always the best path. Maybe you’re awesome enough to get it done right the first time. Or maybe you would learn more by starting something completely new. If someone asks you to perform a bulldozer revision, don’t just jump right in. Make sure their vision lines up with yours, make sure you have the right tools, make sure this is something you really want to do. If I was honest with myself, I would have been better off just moving on to the next novel rather than doing a hatchet job on my first one. I didn’t yet have what it takes.

So before you put yourself through the stress of a Bulldozer revision, make sure you have two things: Confidence (in yourself and in your story) and Courage.

Wish me luck!

This is my wallpaper right now, free from Australia.com. My to-be-bulldozed story is set in the Blue Mountains :)

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Three Words

I’ve been reading a lot of posts by recently-agented writers lately, and it’s got me thinking about success. What differentiates successful people from the unsuccessful? In an industry where so much is subjective, and so much comes down to chance, how can anyone hope to rise above?

Adding to this train of thought was the quote that appeared on my daily calender at work today:

“I’ve failed over and over again in my life and that is why I succeed.” — Michael Jordan.

I’ve come to the conclusion that there are things we can do. That successful people — or people who will in the future obtain success — share some similar qualities. And these are qualities I want to adopt.

Lisa Ann Chickos (one of the wonderful recently-agented writers) wrote a post recently about finding three words that represent the person you are, or want to be. This appeals to my goal-loving nature, and I do think there is power in writing something down, committing to it. So what are my three words? What are the qualities that will one day set me apart?

These are the ones I’ve chosen:

Confidence.

Optimism.

Persistence.

Now, I can’t claim that any of these words describe me now. Especially the first two. I find those difficult. But the only way I will succeed in this crazy business is if I can grab onto these words and LIVE them. Become them. Become the person I want to be.

I will be confident in my own abilities. I will stay optimistic in the face of failure and rejection. And I will persist. I will always persist.

So tell me: What are your three words?

Who do you want to be?

Dream big.

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Revision Tools

So… Other than a spell-check, my revisions are totally, completely, utterly done! My manuscript is all shiny and ready for prime time :) You may not hear much from me on Restless for awhile, as I like to keep this part of the process on the down-low, but I thought you might be interested in hearing about how Restless went from Crappy First Draft to Shiny Shiny Manuscript.

When facing a huge project I like to break things down into smaller steps. Otherwise I become Overwhelmed and Crazy. I might become Overwhelmed and Crazy anyway, but it tends not to last as long when I have a plan. Generally the master plan includes three major drafts: The first, messy draft. The second, clean-up draft, which is then sent to critique partners. And lastly, a revision acting on those critiques. With Restless I had two other drafts beside those.

But for every draft, the same tools are required: A jackhammer, a scalpel and a feather duster.

The Tools of Revision

Jackhammer

The jackhammer is best used in the first few rounds of revision. It’s used for the big picture revisions: Adding or removing characters, changing back-story or character motivations, overhauling plot, changing tense or point of view. BIG stuff. Changes that have ramifications throughout the whole novel. Critique partners are EXCELLENT at pointing out parts of your novel that need a good jackhammering. In my opinion, if you’re not using a jackhammer in your revisions, you’re not digging deep enough. There are always ways you can make your story better, from the roots up.

Scalpel

Scalpel changes are the most difficult, in my opinion. You need focus while using a scalpel. Precision. Finesse. A steady hand. A scalpel is used to perfect the  twists and turns of plot, the details that make your characters seem like real people. A scalpel is used to establish continuity and remove logic problems. It’s possible the reason I find scalpel revisions so difficult is that maintaining an internal logic in my stories is the most challenging part of writing a novel for me, but I’d argue it’s one of the most important. Without scalpel revisions, no one will ever be able to suspend disbelief and lose themselves in your story. They will be constantly distracted by all the wrong details. So, scalpel well, my friends.

Feather duster

This is the easy part, and it’s not particularly important until your last round/s of revision. A feather duster is used for things like spelling, grammar, pretty sentences, strong metaphors. The language stuff I love so much. I know a lot of people who get caught up in dusting their novels far too early. What’s the point of checking your grammar when you’re just about to rip your story apart with a jackhammer? No, you need to leave feather dusting until the end. But, oh, does it feel rewarding when you are finally able to add that final polish.

So, there you have it. The tools of revision. They’re all important and they all contribute to make yours a book worth reading.

In non-book news, last weekend we took Puppy to the beach for the first time, and oh did she have a ball! I may do a full post on our beach trips, but here’s a photo to whet your appetite:

At the beach! :)

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